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:iconhisashi-buri:
Waaah ^u^ Ok next critique~ I hope that you won't be tired because of this ^ ^ Ok let's start. At first- I really like her design, colors matches to each others, theres some nice details and and all thing works ^u^ I also like idea with bandages on her legs, it's that Narut-ish accent that I always loved ^u^ You made her nice hairstyle that cooperates with Masashi Kishimoto style, and for me it's really hard to get that effect. I think that her family symbol would look good even without "petals". And now bad news: You made mistakes with proportions again ;w; Remember about golden rules: Top of head, chin, breasts line, bellybutton, crotch. On this you make her really thin in her lower parts ;w; I don't know much about cats anatomy, but you must train on paws ;w;
But this picture is good ^u^ Wonderful character
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:iconkuuru-kun:
Kuuru-kun Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!!!!

I wish I could take credit on the character, only I can't, because it was an adoptable I bought from my friend, but thank you!!! Every critique you give means a lot, since no one else really critiques me... >_>

I must go read that golden rule again...
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:iconhisashi-buri:
Thanks u////u but I actually saw couple for you ^ ^
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:iconkuuru-kun:
Kuuru-kun Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But you were the first to critique me, and you probably influenced everyone else to!!! :la:
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:iconhisashi-buri:
Waah .////. thanks
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